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September 24th, 2006 (07:28 pm)
cheerful

current mood: cheerful
current song: Loreena McKennitt

So long time since I have been here with you! I missed you very much again. I wish to the day have more then 24 hours!!! I am so busy...
Every day I am at school till 3pm then I am nearly flying at home to get some simple quick food then I must learn or sometimes I have to go for my sister. And in the evening I always go to my boyfriend where I stay long time. I must change it...
But still there is one thing to be happy-my new




Anymore

I took a scissors,
My hair fell on the floor.
Without your caress
I don’t need them anymore.

I took a knife,
Last tear fell on the floor.
I stroke blind my eyes
Cause I don’t need them anymore.

I took a fire,
You left me, closed the door.
I burned my hands
I don’t need them anymore.

I stood upon the edge of a bridge,
I thought I would fly,
But you cut my wings
I am going to die.





Firstly I must say that it is very sad or better to say grim-may be. I wrote it on my knee in the bus (and so it is a little simple) when I had terrible blues because couple of hours before I had argued with my boyfriend. And so I think now you could understand my inspiration ;)
But still there is a light in the deepest darkness :D This is my first poem without any mistake! I always send every my poem to my friend Catherine to England who correct it but this time-no need to correct!

I am sorry that I don't comment your posts...I feel terribly for that! :(

Comments

Posted by: Atanone (atanone)
Posted at: September 24th, 2006 06:53 pm (UTC)
7

the poem is beautiful..sad,but to me it sounds kinda peaceful..I'm weird,am I? :)*hugs*

Posted by: Maiden of the Moon (ladyithildiel)
Posted at: September 24th, 2006 08:01 pm (UTC)
Quistis

It's beautiful, my dear!:)And I'm so very glad to see you online!!!*glomps*

Posted by: Laurelin (laurelinofwotr)
Posted at: September 25th, 2006 03:41 pm (UTC)

*huggles close* Its ok hon. Better to know you're still doing well than to have you post to my comments all the time or to stress over not having enough time to do so. You're in my thoughts! *smooch*

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